CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[HEY COMIC]

Holy crap, dude, this is super depressing.

[Nathan.]

Such amazing stuff.
What great memories.

[Fukari]

Wow, this is really horrible and stupid. There is just so much wrong with this that I don't even know where to start. Apart from the flat colours, bad gradient shading and bad use of lines.. the figure (from the waist out mainly) is disproportioned. The head is skewed and all her facial features are either too big or you've tried to represent them with a line segment. You need to simply your drawings down to basic shapes so you can your proportions right. And also please learn how to draw a proper face that actually looks like a face. If not then please leave all your "OC"s on dA.

StudiOh-Nobi responds:

Haha. Yea I know man the thing is that when I'm drawing my genius gets in the way and I make 1 or 2 mistakes, but thanks for caring about my drawing, much appreciated. :3

[NG Redesign Green Skin v.2]

Awesome work Rob, I always love your stuff and how contrasting and colourful your art always is. I really hope they end up using one of these skins. Love naythe!~

[Houndoom Run Cycle]

Oh man.

That's some pretty nice drawing but the animation is very poor.
It's back should be bending downwards and it's tail area moving upwards.
And you should have at least six frames.
Please try again.

Sabtastic responds:

Aaah! Thanks for the input.
I can't animate my way out of a wet paper bag.

Glad you liked the drawing at least! haha

[MALDEN "Exclamations"]

I like this.

I like your style a lot scoutee!
Interesting looking characters.
Nice fluid drawing style.
You should draw some.
Really big crazy creature.

[Chibi Marill Me]

i reaaly..

..dislike this and think you should never draw a chibi again because chibi's in general are terrible and you should draw all your drawings more like you have drawn your "Etoile" piece because it is actually done well especially the facial features which are great and I have respect for you as an artist when I see that drawing but this chibi one with the flat face, oversized head and really lame and irritating pose doesn't.... :v

[Mother's Day 2011]

How lovely! :3

This is just adorable Kashi, I wish my daughter would have done something like this for me. Quite a nice job on the shading colour however the eyes are odd looking and anime like, they need more rainbowness and squiggly patterns and dots. Ok cya ;D

Kashi responds:

Thanks Cloudy~
I agree with the eyes. They look wonky to me too. My mom still liked it anyways x)

[The Kessel Run]

HOply Shti!

This is really good HeroicDeath! You seem to have improved a lot since the start of 2010 back when I first scouted you. I can't believe you were unscouted you when you shouldn't have been and then you were picked up by Saurus and now you're coming out with these really good portraiture arts, that annoys me.. especially now when that Cube guy is all like "I'm gonna have more scouts than you soon Cloudy >:D Haha" ..yea but anyway, really good work on the shape, colour and light. You just need to work on clarity and giving your drawings more texture and finer details. Making the edges of things and shadows appearing more clearly. This at the moment has a blurry look to it. More detail on things like the hair and eyes could make this seem quite a lot more spectacular. You can't really achieve perfect detail so what many people do is create fake detail or what seems like detail but they're just painting or drawing in a certain way. For example, painting a bit with small, random, long strokes when drawing hair makes it seem like the each hair is drawn in detail when the artist is just doing it randomly. Ok cya dood B)

[Woah man]

Awesome work.

All the colours look a bit too busy in this one, looking a bit grey and over mixed at some parts. You seem quite competent with water colours, you should try using a tlimited colour palette at some point and see what happens. Keep up the good work :)

torithefox responds:

good idea