CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[ELLY]

pretty good

You draw faces too round. You should try drawing the chin a bit longer and not as wide. Also all your characters are too similar with the round face and large chest, you've got a great style it'd be good to see you draw something more interesting :P

HOLIMOUNT responds:

heheheh your rigth about the face you know but hmmmi dont know i like her like that you know ill change it in the next draw of her

[Female]

nice

Eyes are slightly too wide, the chin is too pointy and her legs are WAY too short, they need to be about 2 thirds longer. Otherwise good work and nice style ;)

[It's Great To Be Insane]

nice...

I like the expression and pose, they just seem a bit too thin and long but that's knd f yuor style ;)

Artyluck responds:

thx, yep )

[intoxicate]

Woah man!

The colouring is awesome. His head is too big compared to his body though or maybe the bodies too small. The head looks completely correct you just need to work on the torso part and getting the poportions and angles right, which can be hard but you'll get better with practice. The concept is cool with the lighting and the red swirls.

[NG VaultBoy: Level 7]

Interesting

The lines are way too messy dude, particularily the consistency of the line thickness. The brass knucles look alot neater than the character.

Luis responds:

yea youre right!

[Smiles]

Pretty good!

Make sure you draw thumbs on the correct side of the hand. Her shoulders seem a bit big and her pants legs too but apart from that it's all good. You should try and make your own backgrounds though. Make some more art ;)

XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

It's a he, It's his pink, I know I fucked that up xD
& his clothes are supposed to be poofy x
& I do agree..I'm just no good.
x
thanks!

[M1]

Great!

I'm really liking it, the girl seems a bit too red. The colouring on the creatures garment is awesome, I really like how it looks knid of like a real painting. I think the setting could be more related but keep up the good work.

ImpendingRiot responds:

Thanks dude. Yeah, I fiddled with the saturation a bit too much on the girl I think. That background has changed several times, I couldn't make up my mind in that regard. Anyways, cheers for the review.

[Like monster, like son.]

Haha

This is quite alot better then your first stuff neatness wise. The shading is really good and none of it looks our of place. The only thing that seems wrong is the father's arm, it looks too short. From the boys shoulder it should go straight back or not go back as steep as it does. But it's a great pic overall.

[Mice and Men]

Awesome!

This is quite surreal with the colourful man and his 4 feet. His expression and the cat and how he has a mouse and how he's on all fours really tells a story and explains how this strange man lives and what type of a world he's in. I await your next piece!

J-qb responds:

thanks

[Get Out Of My Cave]

Aweosme!

It looks extremely realistic especially the fire. The dragons still seem slightly digital but it's one of the most realistic 3d art pieces I've seen on NG. Great work :D

DeadExile responds:

Thanks mate!
This one was pretty rushed so i dident have alot of time to detail the cave and dragons as much as i wanted too, I'll probably do a remake when i get the time. :)