CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Corrina-2009]

Awesome work

Is pretty much perfect except that her legs are too big and over sized compared to her body. The hammer head also seems a bit big. It's amazing how you make it look so natural without any shading.

[LONG SMILE]

Great Work!

For some reason I decedied to vote 5. I love the shading around the eyes. It's also pretty creative how you've made it look like he's running on his little oddly shaped leg with lie dust clouds so you can see that he's moving pretty fast. Only bad thing is that the background is a bit bland. Apart from that it's completely perfect :D

[Shiny Shiny]

Too much Green!

You made it a bit too green, should've used more realistic colours. Everything's really good except the ground, branch and the guy don't seem to look correct together, perspective wise. His thumb looks really short because you've drawn his palm too high.

[Ezio]

Nice work!

The lines and colours could be a bit more defined and a background could make it better. This looks heaps good though, sort of looks like he's a ghost of that he's made out of sand and the wind is slowly making him fade away.

[The Hole]

Completely Awesome!

This is looks so simple yet looks heaps good and would be heaps hard to do.
You've used one colour yet made the image look 3'd. The only way it could be better is if you drew the person on an angle so you could see the side of him slightly.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

The way a silhouette works is that it is the outline of a person, and It is difficult to make it at an angle... although I could just simply take a picture of my friend standing at an ANGLE rather than straight forward. Then I could trace the figure onto there. Good idea. Thanks for the compliments.

[Tankmen - "Clock joke"]

Awesome Work!

Can't believe you did that in pencil.
The pencil shading on the background is really good.
The ink shading is heaps good but you could probably do it a bit better on the hands and his chin area.
I love the lighting on his head and the reflection in his visor.
When did Stawberry Clock die??

Hoboweasel responds:

Oh yeah... the hands are a little... sketchy, sort of... huh... anyways, thanks for the review, I appreciate the analytical criticism too.

And Strawberry Clock's not dead (Imo anyways), I just felt it was the only way to incorporate a proper "Clock" joke.

[Gamer-tan]

Ok.. should work on it more.

The shape looks pretty good but the lines aren't smooth.
The hat is out of shape, is a bit big and should sit back on her head more.
Too much of her right foot is visible and her heels are oddly shaped.

levian05 responds:

Here... I think the lines are smoother.
Removed the hat heh.
And the foot.. Bleh, since this is an old drawing, I'll just leave it alone.. Too much trouble ! ;)

[Steel Breed day at the Beach!]

Heaps good.

The lighting and shading is heaps good.
It's cool how you made it look like you drew the background and how you blended the robots into it. Why are the girls legs slighty transparent though?