CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fox hunting]

Interesting piece

I think you could be better but this is kinda cool. It's sort of pop art cross abstract. I hope the next one is alot more detailed and there is a setting and stuff like that.

J-qb responds:

Thanks man! Dont worry; next one will be more detailed. A lot less abstract though; more surreal.

[Yeti Suit]

Nice work!

Shading and colouring is good all you need to do is fix up the lines. You can use the selection(black arrow) tool and fix up the outlines. Try and make the width of the outlines the same width everywhere. The outline gets a bit too thick on the legs but too thin in other parts. May I suggest you turning the smoothing down a bit as this can help make the lines more even. If you want to know more about fixing up things with the arrow tool then talk to ReNaeNae :D

PixelCake responds:

Like I said in the thread I was trying to experiment with line weights...trying to make the parts of her body that were rounder (and/or more feminine) look rounder or curvier with thicker lines...I don't think I executed it well D:

Thank you :3

[I hate you...]

Pretty good...

These latest 2 submissions are quite good but you need to fix up a few things. If you wanna go for a thick lineart style then you have to make sure the lines are even and the corners of things fit together well. This good be a good style for animating :P

Magicalmelonball responds:

They're just drawings. I'm not really going with any style. If you look at my other submissions, my style is really completely different than this. I just got bored and did some quick drawings.

[weird4]

Nice

The guy is drawn really well. You should practice as much as you can. The only thing your drawings are missing are backgrounds.

[COW 80 - Electricity]

So good...

That's really awesome! Why didn't you submit it? The spine is too far to the right of the creature... the hand looks heaps good :D

AwesomeSaurus responds:

ohhh the spineee! damn it can't unsee now!! thanks though cloudy!

[PICOvsKIDSNEXTDOOR1]

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It's done pretty well if it's not traced. But what's with the Bevel filter? You should shade it properly. I really don't like how all your pieces have this big black border around it that takes up space and doesn't do anything. Draw a background in be more creative.

[Super Saiyan Jonny]

So Awesome!

This is by far the most epic depiction of Jonny. I can't really find anything wrong with it... heaps good work Saurus ;)

AwesomeSaurus responds:

Thanks Cloudy! It really takes the spitting image of jonny, right? :p

[Self Portrait 2.0]

Nice work

You've got a very design like style which seems like it would work well on posters or in magazines and such. But I think you should try and take the style in a new direction or learn some new styles. I don't really see how much more you could improve with this style... perhaps try making a pic in a similar style but with heaps of detail or something, it could turn out good. Would the reference pic happen to be anywhere? lol jk :P

[Cursed]

nice

You've done this really well. The concept is good and quite scary. The colouring and lighting looks really good aswell. The nose or the mouth doesn't look right and is out of position. The mouth should be directly under the nose and I think the nose should be a bit further to the right and be more on the face then just coming out of the side.

[The New Grounds Car]

Awesome

NG car = good, needs some headlights :P

Snowman responds:

It has headlights

there not real, but they're there

I thought of putting in led ones, but that would have required drilling and wiring, and overall, more of a risk of me wrecking the body lol