lol man, This so should be frontPaged!
That is a good drawing the expression on the cat is really good. With the lineart I find it too pointy at the ends. You should try making the lines more even in width. The face could use more shading to make it seem more sperical as it seems to flat like this. The text is a bit messy, you should reduce pressure sensitivity when you write it and it should look better but be cool.... i think. I liké your art ms Renee!
Lol thank you, i hope it gets front paged
This is awesoem!
The character looks great, really well drawn... it kind of looks like Captain-Ben. The style looks like it could be from a tv show or childrens program. If only there was a show with an art style like this, it would be awesome :D!
ahah thanks a ton!
Yeah I was experimenting with new things.
I think so too!
xx
Nice attempt
It is quite good, you need to emphasise the shading and make the shadows darker. The top eyelid is too thick and should be quite thin. The eyebrow is also a bit too low. I suggest you use a refernce picture when you draw realistic things. Keep practicing and if something doesn't look right then redo it.
thank you for your help ^^
Cool man
The legs look odd because with the left leg you made it so the knee sticks out too far, the bottom part of the left leg should be more aligned with the thigh. The right leg just bends too much, from the knee it looks like her leg is pointing backwards but then the leg bends and goes across.
The colouring and everything else is good. I don't like the way you draw noses like this, the nose just looks too animal like and not human enough. I really like your style and the colourfullness of your drawings :)
i appreciate your criticism
i noticed too, that's been bothering me a bit (i was asleep when i finished this)
but everything else looks good i didnt want to change it so imma stick with it
well, its the way i draw my noses of myself BUT i kno what you mean
Soul Eater anime has the same noses also, check it out when you can
and thank you so much~ ^_^
lol nice
The lighting is looking really good. I think you should have made the background darker that way the lights would seem brighter. It seems unrealistic how the vexon is darker then the sky, perhaps if the sky was bluer? Your style is still looking awesome, you should be really great once you perfect lighting and make your drawing more detailed :)
Vexons are black in color. Unless I make the sky pitch black (which would rend the Vexon invisible), it would be darker. I suppose I should have chose a slightly brighter sky, with more purple or blue.
Thanks, Cloudy. Glad you like it!
Really great!
I think the colours you've used are really good, the way you colour not perfectly in the lines but behind it is also works really well. Your style looks really awesome in this piece. I don't see why you didn't submit this earlier.
Thank you very much !
I really didnt like the drawing, so i didnt submit this.
But now, when i found it i thought it was interesting !
lol Ashman's CHOW
This is quite different to your other art and shows your diversity. I find it a bit strange that he's wearing a baseball cap with his trenchcoak and shirt... it doesn't look like you've drawn the wooden building in the background yourself, if you didn't draw it then I am dissapoint. The fire looks pretty realistic and the expression on his face and just the whole image really tells you what is going on. Good job sock!
Yeah, the idea with the cap is that he doesn't normally wear a hat at all, it's sort of a temporary half assed disguise to shadow his face in shadow in case anyone sees him. I'm sorry to disappoint you, but I didn't draw the background. I took a photo of wood boards, desaturated it, overlayed it above a brown background and blurred it a bit. Then I airbrushed some black on it so it looked shitty and burned and I painted the fire on top of that. Thanks for commenting though Cloudy :D
Awesome!
Your style is really interesting, it gives everything you draw a strange dream like feeling which I really like. The middle guy's body looks a bit weird because he's got quite a wide body but his arms and face are very skinny. This is a really awesome art piece though and I can't wait to see your next one.
Brilliant work
The colouring and shading is really good. The neck doesn't seem as 3dimentional as the face. I think it could be more interesting if there was more happening. It's cool how her eyes are like melting, keep up the good work.
Pretty good
It's drawn fairly well. I don't really see how you've exhadgerated the pose much, it just seems like a normal pose. I think you should have made her body curve more, particularily her legs and waist because the way she is leaning at the moment looks quite unnatural and a bit odd. The rest is drawn well. Perhaps draw her neck a big wider and add a background.
I guess it depends on my definition of exaggerated... Dictionary dot com says "to magnify beyond the limits of truth; overstate; represent disproportionately: to exaggerate the difficulties of a situation." which is what I suppose what I was going for, although I could probably go further. The idea was that it'd be a little painful to stand like this.
Good suggestion on the curve! I'll have to try it out. Wider Neck sounds good after checking a couple of sources, it does need a bit of a change. And a background wouldn't be bad, but I wouldn't consider this a full blown drawing.
Thanks for the feedback :), greatly appreciated.
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