CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cannon]

Awesome!

Good to see you've started submitting your art here. I really like the smoke and the way you do your lineArt with a thickness to it so it's not just a single line. You should probably colour this and add background. I hope to see more of your stuff here!

Sashura responds:

i would love to add colors to this, but i just cant decide what colors i should use. thanks for the comment :)

[This is...]

I don't like fanart...

...but cos I don't know where this is from it doesn't matter. I like the simple style and cartoony expression. The colours also look good, nice work.

lookandsee responds:

It's a friend's character, so I think absolutely nobody knows where this is from !
And thanks a lot ! :)

[cool guy]

That guy is cool!

Your style is very nice. I like the exhadgeratted pose and the white behind the character is cool. His lue hair is very interesting and different.

peixeaquatico responds:

<> THANKS

[Give a Reason]

Nice work

I like this drawing, I'm not sure who susan is but it is him like and it is drawn well. The short is too short... should be like 4 pixels longer then it would be perfect. Her skin as nearly as pale as the space where there is no background.... :(

PixelCake responds:

I will add a simple bg later XD;;
on my screen I can see the skin on my boyfriend's I can't D:

[product of enormous effort]

LOlolko l nice work

That guys face is good with all the lumps and lines and stuff. I like the way you've drawn the mouth and nose and eye's, it works good. I think you should try using the eraser tool to make some of the lines on his face end in a point as I find it makes the drawing look neater and more refined. Colour would've been cool and I also disagree.

Polonium responds:

yeah I do occasionally do the erased line edges thing but it's difficult with those pretty thin lines and also takes like 400% as much time as just banging out some basic shit with a mouse which is pretty much what this is

I should've SHOULD'VE colored it but didn't aaaa what am I doing with my life

okay uh
thankyou for writing something that isn't completely terrible

[Orange]

So many good!

This is really awesome, I really like the face with all the stuff coming out from the mouth and behind it. The way you've shaded the drawing is really good and looks textured and interesting. It's cool for the orange head guys eye looks like an orange slice.

Hoboweasel responds:

Yay, thanks! I hoped you would like this xD
And yeah, the orange slice was originally an attempt to try drawing the eye sort of how you usually do for your more trippy pictures...

One of my favorite parts is the cracked Buddha face. No idea how it came to that, I was just thinking of putting in a floating stone sculpture (like eater island or something).

[Front Page Me!]

lol man, This so should be frontPaged!

That is a good drawing the expression on the cat is really good. With the lineart I find it too pointy at the ends. You should try making the lines more even in width. The face could use more shading to make it seem more sperical as it seems to flat like this. The text is a bit messy, you should reduce pressure sensitivity when you write it and it should look better but be cool.... i think. I liké your art ms Renee!

amyrenee responds:

Lol thank you, i hope it gets front paged

[IWantToBeLikeTheKidsOnTV]

This is awesoem!

The character looks great, really well drawn... it kind of looks like Captain-Ben. The style looks like it could be from a tv show or childrens program. If only there was a show with an art style like this, it would be awesome :D!

XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

ahah thanks a ton!
Yeah I was experimenting with new things.
I think so too!
xx

[Eye I]

Nice attempt

It is quite good, you need to emphasise the shading and make the shadows darker. The top eyelid is too thick and should be quite thin. The eyebrow is also a bit too low. I suggest you use a refernce picture when you draw realistic things. Keep practicing and if something doesn't look right then redo it.

Zzzong responds:

thank you for your help ^^

[.:My Fantasy Room:.]

Cool man

The legs look odd because with the left leg you made it so the knee sticks out too far, the bottom part of the left leg should be more aligned with the thigh. The right leg just bends too much, from the knee it looks like her leg is pointing backwards but then the leg bends and goes across.

The colouring and everything else is good. I don't like the way you draw noses like this, the nose just looks too animal like and not human enough. I really like your style and the colourfullness of your drawings :)

MissAndyDandy responds:

i appreciate your criticism
i noticed too, that's been bothering me a bit (i was asleep when i finished this)
but everything else looks good i didnt want to change it so imma stick with it

well, its the way i draw my noses of myself BUT i kno what you mean
Soul Eater anime has the same noses also, check it out when you can
and thank you so much~ ^_^