CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[It's Great To Be Insane]

nice...

I like the expression and pose, they just seem a bit too thin and long but that's knd f yuor style ;)

Artyluck responds:

thx, yep )

[NG VaultBoy: Level 7]

Interesting

The lines are way too messy dude, particularily the consistency of the line thickness. The brass knucles look alot neater than the character.

Luis responds:

yea youre right!

[Smiles]

Pretty good!

Make sure you draw thumbs on the correct side of the hand. Her shoulders seem a bit big and her pants legs too but apart from that it's all good. You should try and make your own backgrounds though. Make some more art ;)

XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

It's a he, It's his pink, I know I fucked that up xD
& his clothes are supposed to be poofy x
& I do agree..I'm just no good.
x
thanks!

[M1]

Great!

I'm really liking it, the girl seems a bit too red. The colouring on the creatures garment is awesome, I really like how it looks knid of like a real painting. I think the setting could be more related but keep up the good work.

ImpendingRiot responds:

Thanks dude. Yeah, I fiddled with the saturation a bit too much on the girl I think. That background has changed several times, I couldn't make up my mind in that regard. Anyways, cheers for the review.

[Mice and Men]

Awesome!

This is quite surreal with the colourful man and his 4 feet. His expression and the cat and how he has a mouse and how he's on all fours really tells a story and explains how this strange man lives and what type of a world he's in. I await your next piece!

J-qb responds:

thanks

[Get Out Of My Cave]

Aweosme!

It looks extremely realistic especially the fire. The dragons still seem slightly digital but it's one of the most realistic 3d art pieces I've seen on NG. Great work :D

DeadExile responds:

Thanks mate!
This one was pretty rushed so i dident have alot of time to detail the cave and dragons as much as i wanted too, I'll probably do a remake when i get the time. :)

[Fox hunting]

Interesting piece

I think you could be better but this is kinda cool. It's sort of pop art cross abstract. I hope the next one is alot more detailed and there is a setting and stuff like that.

J-qb responds:

Thanks man! Dont worry; next one will be more detailed. A lot less abstract though; more surreal.

[Yeti Suit]

Nice work!

Shading and colouring is good all you need to do is fix up the lines. You can use the selection(black arrow) tool and fix up the outlines. Try and make the width of the outlines the same width everywhere. The outline gets a bit too thick on the legs but too thin in other parts. May I suggest you turning the smoothing down a bit as this can help make the lines more even. If you want to know more about fixing up things with the arrow tool then talk to ReNaeNae :D

PixelCake responds:

Like I said in the thread I was trying to experiment with line weights...trying to make the parts of her body that were rounder (and/or more feminine) look rounder or curvier with thicker lines...I don't think I executed it well D:

Thank you :3

[I hate you...]

Pretty good...

These latest 2 submissions are quite good but you need to fix up a few things. If you wanna go for a thick lineart style then you have to make sure the lines are even and the corners of things fit together well. This good be a good style for animating :P

Magicalmelonball responds:

They're just drawings. I'm not really going with any style. If you look at my other submissions, my style is really completely different than this. I just got bored and did some quick drawings.

[COW 80 - Electricity]

So good...

That's really awesome! Why didn't you submit it? The spine is too far to the right of the creature... the hand looks heaps good :D

AwesomeSaurus responds:

ohhh the spineee! damn it can't unsee now!! thanks though cloudy!