CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Saiyan Jonny]

So Awesome!

This is by far the most epic depiction of Jonny. I can't really find anything wrong with it... heaps good work Saurus ;)

AwesomeSaurus responds:

Thanks Cloudy! It really takes the spitting image of jonny, right? :p

[The New Grounds Car]

Awesome

NG car = good, needs some headlights :P

Snowman responds:

It has headlights

there not real, but they're there

I thought of putting in led ones, but that would have required drilling and wiring, and overall, more of a risk of me wrecking the body lol

[Frosty MilkShake]

Nice work! :D

You've done the shape and poportions quite well but I think you should work on colours a bit more. Placing a blue character against a blue background isn't a very good choice because it makes it hard to see the character. You should try adding more scenery instead of a simple background like you have done. The head seems too big for the body. The font/text doesn't look very good, it's hard to read and doesn't fit the style of the character. You should draw your text next time instead of using the text tool. I think the colours you've used are too bright and you should reduce the saturation a bit. The shading is done quite well, not perfectly, but you'll definently improve with practice. I look forward to seeing your other work :)

TheTrueBigBoss responds:

thank you!
im still learning the program! you got any tips?
:D

[Just Smile]

Great Work

Your style works really well and the colours you use are really bright and colourful. The backgrounds looks really good, did you draw it yourself? You should try draw whole scenes as it's good practice, will make the picture more interesting and the characters will look like they are somewhere :)

gusana responds:

nia... the background is a texture i found on internet, i just set it the rainbow color, and yeah i´m practicing with scenes and elaborated backgrounds.

[The Hole]

Completely Awesome!

This is looks so simple yet looks heaps good and would be heaps hard to do.
You've used one colour yet made the image look 3'd. The only way it could be better is if you drew the person on an angle so you could see the side of him slightly.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

The way a silhouette works is that it is the outline of a person, and It is difficult to make it at an angle... although I could just simply take a picture of my friend standing at an ANGLE rather than straight forward. Then I could trace the figure onto there. Good idea. Thanks for the compliments.

[Tankmen - "Clock joke"]

Awesome Work!

Can't believe you did that in pencil.
The pencil shading on the background is really good.
The ink shading is heaps good but you could probably do it a bit better on the hands and his chin area.
I love the lighting on his head and the reflection in his visor.
When did Stawberry Clock die??

Hoboweasel responds:

Oh yeah... the hands are a little... sketchy, sort of... huh... anyways, thanks for the review, I appreciate the analytical criticism too.

And Strawberry Clock's not dead (Imo anyways), I just felt it was the only way to incorporate a proper "Clock" joke.

[Gamer-tan]

Ok.. should work on it more.

The shape looks pretty good but the lines aren't smooth.
The hat is out of shape, is a bit big and should sit back on her head more.
Too much of her right foot is visible and her heels are oddly shaped.

levian05 responds:

Here... I think the lines are smoother.
Removed the hat heh.
And the foot.. Bleh, since this is an old drawing, I'll just leave it alone.. Too much trouble ! ;)