Very nice!
This is an interesting Venusaur... you've given him a alligator feel. The only part of the drawing that's done wrong is the end of the mouth, the blue part ends in a point while his gum curves around. An actual background/scene would have made it much better. Some simple cell shading also would have made it better and perhaps different shades/tones of green on the leaves or something. Your drawing style is really good and interesting though and it'll be good to see your future work.
I drew him that way because if I didn't it would've turned out sucky. Veusaur is hard to draw.
I'm probably gonna go back and shade this one later, I was running behind schedule when I colored it :) Thank you for the feedback!
hmm...
Your comics are mildy humorous but on an art scale there's not really much that is interesting or done overly well as everything is quite simple and uses bland greys. Try and add more detail and colour to your scenes and to the characters and I think your art will turn out alot better. Even if it's meant to be a simple comic still take the time to make it better each time and you'll slowly improve aswell :)
I thank you for your input, my style is inherently simple, and I like it that way, but I agree. I need more texture detail.
Really cool.
This is heaps good, I don't think it would look nearly as good if it wasn't animated. I think it could have worked better if the background wasn't the same colour as the frog and if there was a stronger more defined light coming from the bulb. But apart from that I like it :)
Hheeyy thanks a lot for the feedback, i really have to improve the colors and contrast.
Weeell have a nice 'cloud sandwich'!
Game?!
I can see this style working heaps good in a game with some glow effects and stuff like that. With this style because the foreground is completely black and simple you should try and do a bit more with the background.
I can't animate, I don't have the tools to animate. :/
I agree about the background. Looking at it now, this piece is actually a little boring. It's far too simple and it's quite flat. Even working in all black, I could have added smaller hills with smaller trees around the main hill, their size giving the effect that they're farther away. I just neglected to add more to it, and I regret that.
Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you like it.
Nice characters
They are very interesting characters, you should draw more of them. The white background is bad you should always try to add some sort of background.
The lack of a background really hurts most of my earlier submissions to the art portal. I don't do that anymore; even if my backgrounds are bad, I still do them now. They really are pretty enjoyable characters, and I've been trying to work with them recently, though I keep worrying I'll destroy their original charm; I did so in the new piece I made with the girl, Ophelia.
Thanks for the review. A lot of people have liked these characters so far as I've seen, and I like that.
Interesting
The grass is far to light and takes away some depth from the picture. You should have coloured some grey underneath it so it fits in better with everything. The wierd ghost things are really cool and have become apart of your style. Ophelia seems to thin and tall and I think you drew her much better in your original sketch. The dark clouds in the background work well and make the things infront of them stand out more. Great work dude!
I agree she looked better in the original sketch. She's too much taller and nowhere near as pleasant looking. I think this stems from my style kind of leaning towards becoming darker since I drew the original one, though. I do feel that this piece is far better than the original, though, even if her character isn't as good.
I was actually pleased with how grass-like the grass looked, so I didn't really consider that it could be too light. It's a lot lighter than the rest of the piece, now that you mention it, and it does kind of detract from the depth, even though I feel it adds some detail.
Really, I think, based on your review, you should have given it an 8 or, at the most, a 9, but I'm really glad you like it enough to bump its score up despite the flaws. Thanks for the review, cloudy!
Cool stuff
Your cartoony style is really great. It's good how you distort their figures and it still looks right most of the time. This one looks a bit too skewed at some places and seems a bit too cramped.
Thanks! :) Yeah I think its too cramped for the space too heh, next time I will put a little more space around the edges. Thanks for the review
Awesome!
This is looking really awsome. The colouring behind it looks awesome, it makes it look like a canvas. This should turn out really good I can't wait to see it finished.
Thanks cloudy! :P
Pretty good.
You need to work on the shape of your people. They are much too flat and thin. The nose and mouth part of their face comes out way too much, so practice that. Here's a refernce (http://www.posemaniacs.com/?p=33) the rain and umbrella look good though. Too much glow :P
Thanks for the feedback! I'm constantly improving my skills so looking back at this I can completely see your view. One thing to keep in mind is that my characters are stylized so don't expect perfect human anatomy out of them X3
And thanks for the link! I'll be sure to make good use of it :)
pretty good
You draw faces too round. You should try drawing the chin a bit longer and not as wide. Also all your characters are too similar with the round face and large chest, you've got a great style it'd be good to see you draw something more interesting :P
heheheh your rigth about the face you know but hmmmi dont know i like her like that you know ill change it in the next draw of her
i change my mind so much i can't even trust it, my mind changes me so much i can't even trust myself
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