CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[I hate you...]

Pretty good...

These latest 2 submissions are quite good but you need to fix up a few things. If you wanna go for a thick lineart style then you have to make sure the lines are even and the corners of things fit together well. This good be a good style for animating :P

Magicalmelonball responds:

They're just drawings. I'm not really going with any style. If you look at my other submissions, my style is really completely different than this. I just got bored and did some quick drawings.

[COW 80 - Electricity]

So good...

That's really awesome! Why didn't you submit it? The spine is too far to the right of the creature... the hand looks heaps good :D

AwesomeSaurus responds:

ohhh the spineee! damn it can't unsee now!! thanks though cloudy!

[Super Saiyan Jonny]

So Awesome!

This is by far the most epic depiction of Jonny. I can't really find anything wrong with it... heaps good work Saurus ;)

AwesomeSaurus responds:

Thanks Cloudy! It really takes the spitting image of jonny, right? :p

[Cursed]

nice

You've done this really well. The concept is good and quite scary. The colouring and lighting looks really good aswell. The nose or the mouth doesn't look right and is out of position. The mouth should be directly under the nose and I think the nose should be a bit further to the right and be more on the face then just coming out of the side.

[The New Grounds Car]

Awesome

NG car = good, needs some headlights :P

Snowman responds:

It has headlights

there not real, but they're there

I thought of putting in led ones, but that would have required drilling and wiring, and overall, more of a risk of me wrecking the body lol

[Yuki Lowell]

Great :D

The colouring and figure is done really well and looks great. I think you should work on trying to keep your lines the same thickness through out the whole drawing and a background always adds to a drawing. Keep posting your work :)