CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shiny Shiny]

Too much Green!

You made it a bit too green, should've used more realistic colours. Everything's really good except the ground, branch and the guy don't seem to look correct together, perspective wise. His thumb looks really short because you've drawn his palm too high.

[Ezio]

Nice work!

The lines and colours could be a bit more defined and a background could make it better. This looks heaps good though, sort of looks like he's a ghost of that he's made out of sand and the wind is slowly making him fade away.

[The Hole]

Completely Awesome!

This is looks so simple yet looks heaps good and would be heaps hard to do.
You've used one colour yet made the image look 3'd. The only way it could be better is if you drew the person on an angle so you could see the side of him slightly.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

The way a silhouette works is that it is the outline of a person, and It is difficult to make it at an angle... although I could just simply take a picture of my friend standing at an ANGLE rather than straight forward. Then I could trace the figure onto there. Good idea. Thanks for the compliments.

[Tankmen - "Clock joke"]

Awesome Work!

Can't believe you did that in pencil.
The pencil shading on the background is really good.
The ink shading is heaps good but you could probably do it a bit better on the hands and his chin area.
I love the lighting on his head and the reflection in his visor.
When did Stawberry Clock die??

Hoboweasel responds:

Oh yeah... the hands are a little... sketchy, sort of... huh... anyways, thanks for the review, I appreciate the analytical criticism too.

And Strawberry Clock's not dead (Imo anyways), I just felt it was the only way to incorporate a proper "Clock" joke.

[Steel Breed day at the Beach!]

Heaps good.

The lighting and shading is heaps good.
It's cool how you made it look like you drew the background and how you blended the robots into it. Why are the girls legs slighty transparent though?