CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spoon of Doom]

nice work luwano

really good idea you have here. There are a few problems but it's done well overall. The nostril I don't think should be as wide from this side on angle and the closer edge on the spoon needs to be defined alot more. At the moment it's hard to tell what angle the spoon is on, if the beans weren't there it would completely look like the back of the spoon.

Luwano responds:

I see what you mean with the nostrils, but I hope it's still in a reasonable proportion, if the person had kinda big nostrils. :P

The edge is really too vague. I'll use stronger shades and lights for my next pics or at least I'll try.

Thank you for your advice!

[I DONT WHANT YOUR BEANS]

lo!OLlollol!OLO!LOLOOl.....

I really like the idea with the beans flying towards you and stuff, you probably could have done it better though. The closest bean looks really cool, I think perhaps you should just remove the guy and the other beans and just leave that one.

I think perhaps the face/head would have been better if you had done them less realistic/human like as it seems a bit out of place on the body. The shading and texture is really good, nice work.

J-qb responds:

Yeah, I did the face first, and put a lot of effort into getting it to convey emotion; but then I couldnt/didnt want to put that much detail in the rest, which makes it a bit unbalanced.
Thanks for the review.

[Triangle of Happiness]

lolwtfneedsmoar

Your style is really good you just need to add alot more to your art and you'll be awesome. This here while it looks pretty good is far too simple and there's so much that you could have added. I'm sure you can come up with something more detailed and I look forward to seeing it.

[Friday Flood baked bean]

lol nice

the bluriness of it is the biggest/only problem, apart from that it's really good. Perhaps you could have chosen a better colour background that contrasted more. The little guys eyes look really cool and the reflection is done really well and makes it look very 3 dimentional. So you just need to use a sharper brush perhaps emphasise the shading and your good!

[Beany bean bean bean]

Very nice concept.

Would've been cooler if you finished it. You got the icon in there very well and discretely, you did draw it though... your drawing/painting style is very good. Nice work yo!

[1]

pretty cool.

The idea is good and the middle drawing is good but when your doing something like this with heaps of small lines and patterns you really need to be more cautious and take your time with it. If the lines and fills were less messy and all the lines were parallel or evenly spaced it would look much better. You should also fill in the whole border black instead of leaving random patches of white along the outside, it'll bring the drawing together and make it seem more like a professional art piece and not just a drawing.

Whispydriftythings responds:

Thank you for your input, but really none of my drawings are serious, they are just car ride doodles, on napkins and scraps. It's just something to do.

[dreamin]

~haha Awesome!

I think the composition and colours used here are really good. The dark blue hands and heads balances out well and kinda creates a border for the character while still being a part of the picture. The patterns and spider web like things are awesome and I really like the character. Perhaps you could have done something with the whiteness but it's still great.

torithefox responds:

I left it white because i might be adding text as part of my comic project.

[Fairy Tale]

PRetty neat!

The style here is really really good. It's simple but works really well and would be useful for many things. You really should have added alot more though, even just a simple background of grass and sky would have made this seem much more complete.