CloudEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ophelia]

Interesting

The grass is far to light and takes away some depth from the picture. You should have coloured some grey underneath it so it fits in better with everything. The wierd ghost things are really cool and have become apart of your style. Ophelia seems to thin and tall and I think you drew her much better in your original sketch. The dark clouds in the background work well and make the things infront of them stand out more. Great work dude!

Luxembourg responds:

I agree she looked better in the original sketch. She's too much taller and nowhere near as pleasant looking. I think this stems from my style kind of leaning towards becoming darker since I drew the original one, though. I do feel that this piece is far better than the original, though, even if her character isn't as good.
I was actually pleased with how grass-like the grass looked, so I didn't really consider that it could be too light. It's a lot lighter than the rest of the piece, now that you mention it, and it does kind of detract from the depth, even though I feel it adds some detail.
Really, I think, based on your review, you should have given it an 8 or, at the most, a 9, but I'm really glad you like it enough to bump its score up despite the flaws. Thanks for the review, cloudy!

[A Simple Edit. KFC.]

Pretty cool

It's drawn well and the paint platter part looks really good. It would have been better if you had drawn a complete body and why is there so much blackness.

[We are "The RedNecks!!!"]

Cool stuff

Your cartoony style is really great. It's good how you distort their figures and it still looks right most of the time. This one looks a bit too skewed at some places and seems a bit too cramped.

Comick responds:

Thanks! :) Yeah I think its too cramped for the space too heh, next time I will put a little more space around the edges. Thanks for the review

[robo honey bee]

Brilliant!

Everything is donw so well. It's quite an interesting robot concept and is quite creative. Keep up the good work.

[OHEY]

Nice interpretation

You have made bulbasaur much more interesting. His expression is really good. It's weird how your messy ms paint style can look so good and be so interesting. The picture is missing a backgrond though.

[Pulcherimma Mortua]

Awesome

Everything is heaps good the only problem is that her breasts are too big and it ruins what would have been a perfect drawing.

[I know where they all went.]

Nice work

Your style and the colours you use are really intersting and work well. You should add more to your drawings though such as a background/scenery of some sort so it looks like a complete picture and not just a character.

[Robot Day '10 Design]

Awesome!

This is looking really awsome. The colouring behind it looks awesome, it makes it look like a canvas. This should turn out really good I can't wait to see it finished.

Fifty-50 responds:

Thanks cloudy! :P

[Z TEAM CHALK]

awesome

That's really good, I don't like the guys round hands they look stupid. The shading and colour is really great, I don't see much chalk art but this is probably some of the best chalk art I've seen.

[Under the Rain]

Pretty good.

You need to work on the shape of your people. They are much too flat and thin. The nose and mouth part of their face comes out way too much, so practice that. Here's a refernce (http://www.posemaniacs.com/?p=33) the rain and umbrella look good though. Too much glow :P

AnDrew19787 responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm constantly improving my skills so looking back at this I can completely see your view. One thing to keep in mind is that my characters are stylized so don't expect perfect human anatomy out of them X3

And thanks for the link! I'll be sure to make good use of it :)